Wednesday, October 28, 2015
Chief Piece
Tens - no - hundreds of workers come in to get what they need. The non- animal eaters go to one side of the room to get their nourishment, while the meat devourers stick to the main courses. They all come flooding in at once, sending a ripple through the room. It was as if the flood had caused a spark to start an engine. Suddenly, there was noise. Lots of noise. So much noise that someone could get lost in it and never find their way out. The ripples of energy are all organized into parallel lines, each moving with great speed and efficiency, ensuring that each worker gets what they want. Occasionally, there is a disturbance in this natural order. There’s a huge crash, and everybody stares at the source of the disruption. The embarrased worker quickly gets the broom to mop it up, and continues their handling of the machines. Then, when everyone is satisfied, they go and throw all of it away. They throw away everything the machine spits out, usually the stuff they aren’t satisfied with. Eventually they all leave, as quickly as they came. The switch is turned off, and everything is quiet and peaceful like I like it to be, but I can’t enjoy it at all. I too am a part of the machine. I must go as quickly as I came, and hurry off to my next course.
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I really like the low-key use, and underlying feeling of machinery. You reveal how the energy within the cafeteria, varies and "ripples" around the people within the cafeteria. I agree with your depiction of the Chief at KO, seeing how he kind of is a part of the community, yet he is still an outsider, looking in (snow globe/fish bowl effect). I like how he kind of absorbs everything around him, yet does not seem to participate as an active member. I think there is some truth to how energetic and frenzied the feeling is in the cafeteria, and I think it is a very accurate depiction of the cafeteria at KO.
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